Martini’s peach slice,
Dwindles on the rim, before
Falling in. Ripples.
Not a swig, untouched, before
Your hands appraised my blushed skin.
In response to Ronovan Writes’ Haiku Challenge #313 found here
Couldn’t resist lengthening the Haiku.
Experimenting With Creative Writing
Martini’s peach slice,
Dwindles on the rim, before
Falling in. Ripples.
Not a swig, untouched, before
Your hands appraised my blushed skin.
In response to Ronovan Writes’ Haiku Challenge #313 found here
Couldn’t resist lengthening the Haiku.
That just makes it a Tanka, like some do each week. Cheaters!
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I used the words within the Haiku, it simply needed more explanation 😉
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A lovely Tanka ❤
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Thank you! 😊
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You’re welcome 🙂
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