When you journey through memories,
Do you appreciate the ride?
Do you find love or hope or pride?
Do those old times put you at ease?
Or are you caught on choppy seas?
Do you close your denying eyes,
And pray for your boat to capsize?
Do you feel anything at all?
Besides the terrifying fall,
From dreamy fabricated skies.
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In response to Ronovan Writes’ Décima Challenge #19 found here
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I like the thought in the last line bringing up the idea that the skies have been fabricated.
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Thank you! I was really trying to capture that denial! ✨
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I really love the flow of words and thoughts. The journey down memory lane can be tricky, tough to navigate and prone to capsizing waves. 🙏
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Thank you, I’m glad I could capture that! ✨
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Memory lane can be like that. Rough waters! Starts out as a leisurely cruise and all of the sudden you’re capsized! 😊
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This should have a lot more likes than it does. Nice.
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Thank you! ✨
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I’ve just picked this up with thanks to Ronovan’s round up … and also like it a lot!!!
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Thank you so much! 😊
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