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Iceberg’s Tip Décima

The problem with a slow dance is,
It’s flawless – besides when it’s not.
Time heals, forgiveness, forgot.
The dilemma with a trance is,
Giving out infinite chances.
March down a disappointing track,
Waiting for your disguise to crack.
Each final straw, each iceberg’s tip,
Expectations finally slip,
And now there is no waltzing back.

Image credit: pixabay.com

In response to Ronovan Writes’ Décima Challenge found here

8 thoughts on “Iceberg’s Tip Décima

  1. Nice. I like how you did this part:
    The dilemma with a trance is,
    Giving out infinite chances.

    I love breaking the sounds of a words down to get the rhymes in. 🙂

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  2. Love your poetic take on this dance of life! Lots of emotions and metaphors that had me waltzing around the floor. 🙏

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