Occhiolism
The sorry fact is that you are you,
And I am me.
In this experiment we call life,
Your own world is free.
It’s a gift you can’t exchange.
You were born this way.
Every detail of your script
Makes a unique play,
But this is occhiolism,
You can’t extrapolate.
Your mistakes and regrets
Remain a heavy weight,
Keeping you from change,
Obstructing your perceptions.
We are all insignificant,
With no exceptions.
In response to the twenty-seventh “obscure sorrows” prompt from NaPoWriMo.net
I eventually settled on the word “occhiolism” from the Dictionary of Obscure Sorrows.
To paraphrase, occhiolism is the knowledge that your own perceptions are insignificant, as they are inferred from only one experience, and as a result, you will never understand the world.
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Such a beautiful poem!
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Thank you! ✨
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Very nice! Congrats on being featured! I happened to choose occhiolism for my poem as well. It’s certainly an evocative concept.
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Thanks so much! Yes, it is definitely a word worthy of being in the Dictionary of Obscure Sorrows! ✨
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Awesome opening – it just goes BOOM! I also love the idea of each person’s life as a gift that can’t be exchanged. Congrats on this piece and the well-deserved feature.
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Thank you Alana! ✨
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Congratulations on the featured poem – clever how you managed to get the keyword in too!
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Thank you Nina! ✨
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This is lovely Rachael. And I’ve learnt a new word
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Thank you! ✨
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Lovely! Congrats on being featured!
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Lovely
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Great poem. Great message. Great word. Good job. Congrats. Keep going and going. You rock.
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Thank you, you’re very kind! ✨
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