You miss so much when you are rushed.
A white dove’s feather softly falls,
As lions flex their golden paws.
A ripened berry’s body blushed,
Before it’s bursting flesh was crushed.
A stem will grow with twists and swirls,
Before a single petal curls.
Perfect flakes of snow melt so fast,
In less time than eclipses last.
Wander free but don’t miss life’s pearls.
Image credit: pixabay.com
In response to Ronovan Writes’ Décima Challenge found here
I like the comparison of how long a flake of snow lasts and an eclipse.
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Thank you! ✨
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Dual meanings. At least as I see it. But then, I am a Gemini, so I see the duality in everything.
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Pray tell, what two meanings do you see? ✨
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Beautiful 💜
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A pleasure 💜
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Your décima is filled with vivid imagery, and I particularly love “A ripened berry’s body blushed,” because of the alliteration. ❤
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Thank you so much ✨
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